Of course, I forgot the most important: Haiku is an art, not a science.You may be able to make it into a sience by analyzing various haiku. That\u2019s what I tried. That is like taking all the petals from a flower to see where the beauty lies. Also, I forgot that beauty lies in the eye of the beholder. I am the viewer. I am to blame if I don\u2019t see the beauty. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
So, after having read some of the Penguin Book of Haiku, I can say that a good Haiku is up the the reader, although not whatever can be called a Haiku.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Let me only give some good examples of haiku. Good, because they have been published. There is a procedure that guarantees quality in publication. I have chosen some haiku written by Alan Summers, for several reasons:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
– He is well known in the Haiku society<\/p>\n\n\n\n
– He has taught Haiku for a long time<\/p>\n\n\n\n
– He is still humble enough to say:\u201d I am learning.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n
The examples come here:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
why didn\u2019t I<\/p>\n\n\n\n
the blue in her eyes<\/p>\n\n\n\n
cutting string<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Alan Summers. Publication credit: Sonic Boom, Issue Thirteen 2018<\/p>\n\n\n\n
http:\/\/docs.wixstatic.com\/ugd\/61020d_1712d51103d94ed4be98f6b3470e2e9d.pdf <\/p>\n\n\n\n
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smooth coins<\/p>\n\n\n\n
how we slip away<\/p>\n\n\n\n
into blue velvet<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Alan Summers <\/p>\n\n\n\n
The Haiku Foundation HAIKU DIALOGUE \u2013 a smooth coin <\/p>\n\n\n\n
ed. Craig Kittner (February 2019)<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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Of course, I forgot the most important: Haiku is an art, not a science.You may be able to make it into a sience by analyzing various haiku. That\u2019s what I tried. That is like taking all the petals from a flower to see where the beauty lies. Also, I forgot that beauty lies in the … Forts\u00e4tt l\u00e4sa Examples of Good Haiku<\/span>